Sydney Moody
Dr.
Brown
ENG
306
13
April 2016
Movement
Artifact Rough Draft
The Anti-vaccination movement may have
gained so much traction in the United States because the core of the protest encompasses
essential components of the American identity. The protests in California
concerning the recent passing of Senate Bill 277 elicited the creation of new
slogans in support of the anti-vaccination movement. The most coercive of which
is the slogan “If there is a risk, there must be a choice.” This slogan has no
clear author, but rings with American patriotism. Those who use this slogan are
referring to the proposed risks involved with vaccinations, especially in
children. This slogan is credible amongst American citizens, because in most
risky circumstances, we are promised a choice. When it comes to smoking
cigarettes or drinking alcohol, for example, adult Americans are given the
choice not to engage in these risky behaviors. Anti-vaccination protestors
advocate for this same liberty to refuse vaccines that they believe come with
unjustified risks. Those who profess this slogan are demanding that government
officials intervene on behalf of concerned citizens who refuse to take part in
what they believe to be a risky endeavor.
When a law such as Senate Bill 277 creates
this much public arousal and outcry, people tend to approach government
officials pleading for an appeal. California resident, Laura Hayes, is one such
individual. In open letter to California state senator, Ted Gaines, Laura Hayes
wrote:
“SB 277 removes all non-medical
exemptions for state-mandated vaccines. One need only back it up one step
further to see that mandates in and of themselves are not in alignment with the
U.S. Constitution, nor with the international code of ethics found in The
Nuremberg Code, nor with the ethical practice of medicine which requires prior,
voluntary, and informed consent.”
The reference to the United States
Constitution, a document that upholds many fundamental American values, represents
a powerful use of ethos. To this day, American citizens regard the document
with profound reverence. More than two hundred years after the creation of the
Constitution (www.archives.gov), it means
something to defend the rights that it promised. By referencing the
Constitution, Hayes directly questions the legitimacy of Senate Bill 277.
Also in Hayes’ statement, we see a key
phrase of the Anti-Vaccination Movement previously discussed, “informed consent” (Hayes). As a society, we
place a great deal of trust in physicians and organizations like the Center for
Disease Control (CDC) to make knowledgeable decisions about the healthcare that
is made available to us. However, Hayes is claiming that a patient’s consent is
just as vital to any medical procedure as it is when administering vaccines. Hayes
also directly references the Nuremberg Code, which states that, “voluntary
consent of the human subject is absolutely essential” (hhs.gov). The inclusion
of mandatory vaccination laws in states like California does not force parents
to vaccinate their children, but newly implicated restrictions make it
difficult to completely avoid vaccines.
Hayes intentionally alluded to the
Nuremberg Code and the U.S. Constitution to provide a source of ethos in her
declaration against mandatory vaccination laws. Similarly, anti-vaccination
campaigns use ideas fundamental to the idea of being American to market their
opinions about vaccines.
Image credit: parentsrightscalifornia.weebly.com
The image shown above was published on the
website for the California Coalition for Vaccine Choice, known as
parentsrightscalifornia.weebly.com. This artifact immediately directs reader’s
attention to a sacred symbol of American patriots, the American flag. The flag
itself is emblematic of American triumph and creates strong emotions. It was
raised after the terrorist attack on September 11, 2001. It is flown outside
the United States Capitol building and throughout Washington D.C. (house.gov).
It distinguishes American citizens from athletes from around the world during
the Olympics. The background chosen in the image above is an example of pathos,
because the American flag has incredible sentimental value.
Additionally, this image uses a word that
is quintessential to the American identity –“freedom.” It is worth noting here
that although freedom is abundant in this country, it is not absolute
throughout the world. It is a privilege that American citizens honor by paying
respects to the American soldiers and the American flag. Lee Greenwood captures
this spirit in the lyrics of his song God Bless the USA, “I’m proud to be an
American, where at least I know I’m free. And I won’t forget the men who died,
who gave that right to me” (scoutsongs.com).
Finally, this image uses the word
“mandatory.” This word was specifically chosen to use the language of Senate
Bill 277 against mandatory vaccine advocates (leginfo.ca.gov). The image reads,
“Freedom of choice should be mandatory.” The wording of this image promotes the
idea that instead of mandating vaccinations in California, the state should
mandate that every citizen be given a choice about whether or not to utilize
immunizations. The most compelling aspect of this image is that the ad does not
need to use the word “vaccination” to capture the anti-vaccination movement. There
is no mention of vaccinations because it has been figuratively ripped from its
association with the word “mandatory,” and replaced with “freedom of choice.”
On
the other half of the Vaccine Debate, pro-vaccine activists have utilized their
own protest artifacts to foster faith in science and vaccines. A member of
UNICEF, Anthony Lake, captured an important piece of the pro-vaccine movement
in the following statement of a keynote speech:
“Every
child has a fundamental right to survive, to thrive and to grow. It should
enrage us all that something as relatively inexpensive, easy to deliver and
effective as routine vaccination is still not reaching the places where it can
do the most good, and save the most children” (Lake).
In the Preamble of the Constitution, the
government promises to “promote the general Welfare” (archives.gov), and Lake’s
statement prompts the international community to do the same. The various
diseases that vaccines can prevent are “…a major risk to the health and welfare
of human populations…” (Sun et al., 114), so it makes sense from a pro-vaccine
point of view to promote vaccinations. The vaccinations for several common diseases
have prevented “around six million annual deaths globally” (Sun et al., 14). In
light of this worrisome statistic, it is clear why Anthony Lake would advocate
for “routine vaccination” (Lake).
The language of this segment of his speech
vividly evokes pathos because he references the lives of young, vulnerable
children. When a child’s life is implicated by our decisions, people tend to
listen. Additionally, Lake mentions that these “relatively inexpensive” (Lake)
vaccinations are not be used to their intended purpose, which introduces a hint
of logos into this statement. He eludes to illogical reasons why vaccinations have
not been used to their full potential.
Even parents of children who had adverse
affects to vaccinations recognize the importance of immunizations. Emily West,
a mother whose son has adverse affects after being vaccinated, proclaimed her
pro-vaccination stance in a CNN interview with Jareen Imam:
“‘At least try to vaccinate…I have tried,
and I did it because it is part of my civic duty.’” (qtd. Imam).
Emily West’s use of the phrase “civic duty”
is a compelling use of pathos because American citizens have been taught not to
take civic duties lightly. By elevating the practice of vaccination to the same
level as “…obeying the laws of the country, paying taxes levied by the
government, or serving on a jury…” (Liverpool), we assume that American
citizens will comply with the best of their ability. Laws, taxes, and juries
are created in the interest of the society as a whole. Similarly, vaccines are
used in the interest of not only those who are vaccinated, but also those who
cannot be vaccinated due to other health concerns.
Mandatory vaccination laws, such as Senate
Bill 277, create “a protective effect called herd immunity that interrupts the
spread of the virus to vulnerable people” (Hensley). Carl Krawitt, another
concerned parent whose child cannot be immunized, is also in favor of
vaccinations (Aliferis). His son, Rhett, suffered from leukemia at an early age
and now “depends on everyone around him for protection” (Aliferis). With
individuals like Krawitt and West advocating for their child’s lives and vaccinations
simultaneously, it is easy to see how pathos can be incorporated into the rhetoric
of both sides of the controversy
The dilemma with the vaccination debate is
that people on both sides are interested in advocating for a worthy cause, child
safety. Although the evidence overwhelmingly supports vaccinations, the United
States is a democracy and people have the right to openly protest against them
(Jana et al.). The Anti-Vaccination movement has managed to utilize both ethos
and pathos in their campaign to repeal mandatory vaccination laws. Backed by
Jenny McCarthy and Andrew Wakefield, the movement has captured our attention by
purporting an association between vaccines and autism as well as various other
conspiracies. Those who continue to advocate for vaccines have ethos, pathos,
and logos in their favor, with many physicians, child cancer survivors, and
statistics in support of vaccines.
Works Cited
Primary Sources:
California Senate Bill 277.
leginfo.ca.gov. 19 February 2015. Web. 5 April 2016.
Constitution of
the United States. archives.gov. Web.
14 April 2016.
Greenwood, Lee. “God Bless The USA.” scoutsongs.com. Web. 14 April 2016.
Hayes, Laura. Letter to Senator Gaines. California Coalition for Vaccine Choice.
20 March 2015. Web. 14 April 2016.
The Nuremberg Code. hhs.gov. Web. 14 April 2016.
Secondary
Sources:
Aliferis, Lisa. “To Protect His Son, A
Father Asks School To Bar Unvaccinated Children.” npr.org. 27 January 2015. Web. 14 April 2016.
Constitution
Quotes. brainyquote.com. Web. 14
April 2016.
Flags Over the
Capitol. house.gov. Web. 14 April
2016.
Hensley, Scott. “Vaccination Gaps Helped
Fuel Disneyland Measles Spread.” npr.org.
16 March 2015. Web. 4 April 2016.
Imam, Jareen. “Parents to parents:
Vaccinating is personal.” CNN. 7
February 2015. Web. 14 April 2016.
Jana, Laura A. June E. Osborn. “The History of Vaccine
Challenges: Conquering Diseases, Plagued by Controversy.” Vaccinophobia and
Vaccine Controversies of the 21st Century. pgs. 1-13. 27 May
2013. Web. 7 April 2016.
Lake, Anthony. “Reaching the Fifth Child:
Immunization and Equity.” UNICEF Institute of Medicine Annual Meeting,
Washington D.C. 17 October 20111. Keynote Speech. unicef.org. Web. 14 April 2016.
Liverpool, Nicholas J.O. “Civil Rights,
Civic Duties and Responsibilities.” Government
of the Commonwealth of Dominca, Office of the President. Web. 14 April
2016.
Sun, Chengjun. Wei Yang. “Impact of
Vaccination on Disease Prevention and Control.” Immunology and Immune System Disorders: Vaccinations: Procedures, Types
and Controversy. Adeline I. Bezio and Braydon E. Campbell. New York, NY: Nova Biomedical, (2012). 49-74.
ProQuest ebrary. Web. 14 April 2016.

This draft is organized really well because I followed every point that was made about how each side of the debate used the American Identity to back their side up. You started by giving us a specific object, but further on the artifact expands to be about many things that have to do with the American Identity. I think that this makes your argument a really strong one. The rhetorical situation and strategies are clearly displayed in this essay by going over the different people involved, the ways they talked about, the items they talked about, and the ways it affected perception.
ReplyDeleteAll your three drafts flow very well when it comes to content. The beginnings might need some transitions but overall as a reader of your research essay I completely understood the protest and all the arguments you made. You took a topic that was huge and packaged it around the California bill at the end which tied it up nicely.
Going into the conclusion I'd expect to see if the protest was legible, how it affected the medical/political fields, what the protest may do to affect the future of vaccination policies, and anything else about the protest rhetoric.
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ReplyDeleteYour paper seems well organized, and the transition between the two sides seemed appropriate. For the most part your paper effectively communicated the rhetoric in this protest. However, there was at least one instance of not completing a point (I do that all the time too). The identity of freedom and its costs is left with a short uncompleted paragraph.
ReplyDeleteThe cost of Freedom and its identity is a huge part of being an American. You start to talk about the responsibilities that are given to those who are free, but for the Anti vaccination side, you say just one thing about the cost of freedom. You are right that it is one responsibility of our freedom to recognize the sacrifice soldiers have made and to honor them, but as you mention much later civic duties are another responsibility of freedom. Do anti-vaccination campaigners recognize any other civic duties beyond honoring soldiers and their deaths? What draws the line for them? Why is it okay to ignore vaccinations? Hopefully that made sense. I would just expand on freedom both from an anti-vaccination and a pro- vaccination view.
The Nuremberg quote was good, but a brief description of what the Nuremberg Code is would be nice for those unacquainted with it.
Yes, all three sections seem coherent. A few nice transition paragraphs are required to make this into one giant paper.
It's looking good.
I would expect the conclusion to include what the protest is looking like now and if its swaying in one direction as opposed to other. I agree with Frank, how has this protest effected new legislation involving vaccinations, and how will it effect the ones to come?