Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Rhetoric of Protest: Rough Draft


Julian Aronfeld
2/22/16
There's something happening here
But what it is ain't exactly clear
There's a man with a gun over there
Telling me I got to beware
I think it's time we stop
Children, what's that sound?
Everybody look - what's going down?
There's battle lines being drawn
Nobody's right if everybody's wrong
Young people speaking' their minds
Getting so much resistance from behind

            November 1966, the Sunset Strip Riots in Hollywood, California; young hippies butting heads with riot shields as celebrities are handcuffed just for protesting an unfair traffic law. Although the song “For What It’s Worth” by Buffalo Springfield is commonly mistaken as an anti-war song, protesting the war in Vietnam, the song is actually written based on the Sunset Strip Riots that occurred 1966 through 1970. The riots were started because of unfair traffic laws that had nothing to do with the ongoing war. Though the song doesn’t reflect the public’s feelings about the war directly, this song serves as a useful protest artifact which reflects the high tensions and emotions in the country during a time of war, and during a time when counter-culture had a lot of societal significance.
            “For What It’s Worth” is a song reflecting the side of the counter-culture. A very popular rock club in Hollywood called Pandora’s Box had closed down because residents and business owners living around the night club wanted a curfew and traffic blocks to stop the annoyance. Stephen Stills, writer of the song “For What It’s Worth”, had participated in the Sunset Strip Riots in 1966. His bias on the subject is obvious, given that he refused to call it a riot, and instead called it “’A funeral for Pandora’s Box’” and described it as “’Looking like a revolution’” (LA Times). The writer, and the band as a whole, identified itself with the counter-culture. The counter-culture was a revolutionary movement for youth in the 1960s and 1970s. It sparked an anti-government culture partially thanks to the baby-boom, which left youths marginalized and desperate for an identity, and partially thanks to the war in Vietnam, which left young people scared for their lives over an ideological difference that many of them felt apathetic toward in the first place. The tension grew as the generation grew older and more aware, as generations tend to do. Kennedy’s “liberal ideology” on foreign affairs was losing popularity, such as the “most urgent threat to [Capitalism] being Communism” and more importantly, the belief that it was “the duty of the US to bring [Capitalism] to the rest of the world” (Churney). The new liberal identity focused on anti-war and civil rights movements, and even shunned the evils and greediness of Capitalism. The song itself was written to help those who weren’t there visualize the riots, but that only scratches the surface of the song’s meaning. The listener is supposed to visualize the real tension in the air and the raw emotions felt. Hearing about it is obviously not the same as really being there; strong emotions felt by everyone there were the catalyst for the violence to escalate. It started with some small fights, and became a revolution, as protestors even attempted to tip a bus over. In fact, the song was first played on a one-time only re-opening of the night club, in front of an audience mostly comprised of those who participated in the riots (LA Times). Stills saw the embodiment of hippie counter-culture during the Sunset Strip Riots, the passion and need for change; he attempted to recreate that passion in his song, and show the world what it was really like to be a part of the revolution.
            Stephen Stills wanted to make a bold statement in his song “For What It’s Worth”. His attempt to recreate the passions felt during his participation in the Sunset Strip Riots is obvious when looking at the rhetorical strategies used in the song lyrics and music style. With context, it is obvious that the song is meant for the youth of America, as he describes the riots from a 2nd person point of view. Stephen Stills’ use of visualization, 2nd person, and vague language appeals to the youths in the counter-culture, by projecting strong emotions toward revolution he felt during the riots.
            Stills’ use of visualization is the backbone of the rhetorical strategies in his song, supplemented by his 2nd person descriptions. He describes a scene of “A man with a gun…Battle lines being drawn…A thousand people in the streets” (Stills). These visualizations serve to make the listener picture all of the details of the riots, but also from his point of view. By using the words “here,” “over there,” and “you”, a new layer of description is added. The listener is no longer watching the riots happen, they are participating in them alongside the band. This is a very effective use of pathos through empathy triggering strong emotional connection. When he identifies the listener as a fellow revolutionary, he invites his audience to put themselves in his shoes and really watch the violence. This can evoke emotion, since the listener is now a part of the song. It is also helpful that Stills himself is part of the identity he projects onto his audience. It adds depth to his ethos for the audience because now he isn’t simply trustworthy because he was at the riots; he was there with you. You trust his word, because he had experienced the emotions he is making you feel. An example of an emotion he wants his listener to feel, more prominent that anything else, is a sense of confusion. He achieved this end rather well with his use of vague language. The listener is thrown into a situation where “Something’s happening here/But what it is ain’t exactly clear”, and confusion sets in right off the get-go (Stills). Confusion is a strong emotion, because it catalyzes other feelings for people. Depending on the situation, confusion can become fear, frustration, excitement, hysteria, or any combination of these emotions. When thrown in with large crowds and police intervention, it becomes much clearer why the riots broke out into such a display of violence and hysteria. Throughout the song, his language conveys confusion, like urging listeners to “Stop children/What’s that sound? /Everybody look-what’s going down?”  (Stills). He is asking the audience if they know what is going on, even though they obviously don’t, which is supposed to create a sense of confusion for the listener. A young protestor knows the feeling of fear and confusion, so his audience is reached very well simply through the rhetorical strategies used. Logic is not really a part of his purpose, so Logos is hard to be found in this song. Logic doesn’t have a place in riots and counter-culture, and certainly doesn’t have a place in strong emotional response.
Rhetorically, Stills used rhetorical strategies very well; he created an aura of confusion and excitement, and threw the listener in without warning. Historically, the song serves as an icon for 1960s counter-culture, protest ideology, and anti-establishment. It holds the #63 spot on the Rolling Stone’s “500 Greatest Songs of All Time” and is used commonly to represent 1960s culture, such as the movie “Forrest Gump”. Stills wrote a strong piece that artistically captured a moment in time when he felt confused and fearful; when a peaceful event in memoriam of a popular club quickly became anarchy.
           








Works Cited

Rasmussen, Cecilia. “Closing of club ignited the ‘Sunset Strip Riots’” Los Angeles Times. Los Angeles Times Publisher 5, Aug. 2007. Web. http://articles.latimes.com/2007/aug/05/local/me-then5

Churney, Linda. “Student Protest in the 1960s” Yale University Yale-New Haven Teachers Institute. 2016. Web. http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/1979/2/79.02.03.x.html

Stills, Stephen. For What It's Worth. Buffalo Springfield. Atco Producers, 1967.



5 comments:

  1. In the first half of your paper I was able to identify the audience, context, and purpose but I did have to do some re reading in order to find it. I believe your second paragraph would benefit from restructuring it, so that it is more clear. For example you use the term counter-culture three times before you define it, so I think if you moved that sentence up so it is the second sentence in the paragraph, it would make a lot more sense. The explanation of the Pandora’s Box night club was a little confusing for me, so you might need to restructure your sentences so it is more clear.

    I would also suggest breaking your paper up into more paragraphs so it is easier to read. The two major paragraphs can easily be broken up in order to provide an easier flow to the paper.

    I think your analysis of the use of confusion was very interesting and something I had not considered before. You say in your conclusion that you believe this song was an effective protest, which I did not expect reading your introduction when you mention people misinterpret this song as protesting the Vietnam War. I believe this use of confusion in the song is probably the reason for that, and for me makes it a less effective protest. You may want to try and connect the ideas in your introduction and conclusion more, I feel like they are separated.

    Overall I think that your writing is very good and your ideas are strong, they just need to be restructured.

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  2. Julian:

    I watched a Video buffalo Springfield performing this in 1967, but since music videos didn’t really start until the 80’s I guess that’s the closest I’ll get!

    You start your paper with about half of the lyrics for the full song. Are you only considering that portion of the lyrics or addressing all of them? Because that’s slightly misleading.

    In relation to Anna’s comment, I totally agree with defining counter culture earlier and making more paragraphs, because reading large block texts with multiple ideas is a struggle.

    I think your confusion bit was awesome, so to spin off of what Anna said, maybe make the distinction between the pathos strategy of confusion and the resulting misallocation of the meaning of the song to the Vietnam war instead of the sunset street riots as very different things. Because both points are important. Like I was literally thinking “yaaaaaaaaaaasssss” to your entire confusion pathos analysis.

    Which by the way, maybe be sure to include all the pathos stuff together, instead of talking about pathos with imagery, then ethos with identifying as a peer, and then back to pathos with feeling confused. It’s a bit messy.

    Also, expand on the music style thing. I personally think this song is pretty chill, I don’t headbang or get hyped, so maybe the style (which might just be a result of the genre that this band is in or the time era) is a reason why this song is ineffective. You talked a lot about passion and I don’t get the feeling of passion from the acoustic strumming.

    I think your conclusion needs redo-ing. That’s the part where you take all of the strategies you’ve analyzed and make a ruling on whether it was effective or not for the protest that it’s representing, and I don’t think you do that. You just sort of indicate that the song is generically protest-y.

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  3. First of all, I love that you put the lyrics above the essay, this brings readers into question about what they are reading, and as they keep reading, they are better able to understand the lyrics. I hope you break it down line per line throughout the essay but we shall see.
    Why do you think the song serves as a useful protest artifact? How does it reflect tensions and emotions in the country during the time of war?
    Correction: 2nd paragraph: “Looking Like a Revolution”(LA Times).
    I would add a little back-ground information about the band so the readers can kind of get an idea about what the band was and what they were about, what they represent etc. You’re paper is also a bit lengthy. I recommend that you go back re-read it and see what parts you can condense and which parts you should cut out. Then see if you can break them up into paragraphs. This will better help with structure and shorten your lengthy essay.
    I would just have to note the structure, other than that, I love your topic and I see a very well written essay in your future! Let me know if you want any of us to re-edit your paper after making the changes you need.

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  4. Sorry, the Correction in the 2nd paragraph needs to be italicized as well, the word doc did not convert that correction.

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  5. To improve my paper, I will definitely be doing some re-structuring to the entire essay. I will be breaking these lengthy paragraphs up to make it less daunting. I will also go over my rhetorical analysis paragraph about ethos and pathos, and reorganize them so it doesn't jump from one subject to the next. I want to also add some parts in about his song style, because I realize that it seems unclear how emotional I claim this dull-sounding song to be. I will probably mention the fact that the song is in a minor key, since that plays a huge role in the song's efficacy. I need to add a couple more citations as well; reading back I see I make some unfounded claims that need to be cited to be taken seriously. I think doing all this will make my essay great. Thanks for the feedback.

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