1. The organization was unclear; the explanation for what the object of protest was, and how it ties to their main ideas.
2. Not a lot of analyzing the use of pathos, logos, and ethos, or what that mean, why the 3 were used or how effective.
3. Didn't meet the requirements, so there were sections missing. Not only was it not long, but it also was missing ways to tie ideas to each other. It was a lacking paper.
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